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For an assignment for school in which we have to analyze a story and its elements, I wrote a little tidbit about Bill and Tom, and analyzed it. More goes into a story episode than you think! You have to have certain story grammar elements for a story to be considered complete, and you have to add even more (we call it "story sparkle") to make your story interesting. There are a set of rules to follow. Children with language impairments who talk so normally you wouldn't suspect a thing struggle greatly with generating stories.

SO on to the juicy stuff. My little story, inspired by a doodle of mine. This story is called, "Bill in a Bucket."



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melluransa: (bill charming fanparty smile)
This is a story I found when I cleaned out my computer desk. I wrote this when I was in second grade. I can't believe I used semicolons at age 7 or 8. I was awesome. I'm gonna type it below. It's not long. It's unedited save for me putting paragraph breaks.

I couldn't see over the tall wildflowers and buttercups and I wanted to see what was in the world )
melluransa: (love is bill tom gustav and georg)
In which Bill cheered for them to do it doggy style, Gustav called their room, Georg wanted to slip 10 euro under their door to get them to keep going, and Tom wanted to do her like a real man. XD

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